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VALUE THE WORKS OF AN AGING POET FOR WHAT THEY ARE

Seamus Heaney. ELECTRIC LIGHT: Poems. New York: Farrar, Straus and Giroux, 2001.

 

 

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VALUE THE WORKS OF AN AGING POET FOR WHAT THEY ARE

Seamus Heaney. ELECTRIC LIGHT: Poems. New York: Farrar, Straus and Giroux, 2001.

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2. Cultural context and stylistic fashions

3. Some of Heaney's poems in operation: At Toomebridge | Perch | Lupins | Known World | The Gaeltacht | On His Work in the English Tongue | Electric Light

 

 

 

 

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..VALUE THE WORKS OF AN AGING POET FOR WHAT THEY ARE

Seamus Heaney. ELECTRIC LIGHT: Poems. New York: Farrar, Straus and Giroux, 2001.

1. The backward view of life

Poetry books by writers staring into the door of old age might be corralled into a genre of their own.

A literature teacher in college told us many decades ago that the poetry that lasts usually comes from poets writing when they are young. Poetry done later in life, he taught, tended to be slack or strained; it lacked the exuberance for life and form that seems to activate most great poetry. Wordsworth was his favorite example.

I might concede this old point in favor of poetry by the young. But with work in hand like that of sixty-plus Seamus Heaney in Electric Light, I want to value it for what it is. (He was born in 1939.)

There is a certain inevitability about the subject matter of a book by a man in Heaney's stage of life and career. F. Scott Fitzgerald remarked somewhere on the critical moment when a person first takes the backward view of life (that moment came much sooner in Fitzgerald's mind than Heaney's age at the time he wrote these poems). Heaney's poems here arise from taking the backward view of life. They reflect on where he grew up. They return to where he has been and why. They memorialize the people he knew--the famous and the others.

The older poet has the luxury of looking both ways. He sees the blank wall of death ahead of him. He nevertheless still can see the green and giving landscape he has traveled through, with its joy and trouble, just behind him. That landscape rewards him now as it did not when he first passed through. Then it was a hazard of fortune. Now it is a certainty of passage accomplished. That certainty infuses the lines of these poems by Heaney.

But they are not merely an old life remembered. They are a new set of lines, stimulated by life remembered, influenced by the shortening future, offering themselves as shapely new thought.

If the reader of that shapely thought happens also to be taking the backward view of life, his reading of the work creates a resonance. In the lines stimulated by what the poet feels that he experienced, this reader can hear echoes of what he himself has experienced. This does not necessarily give him greater critical sharpness to penetrate the poems; but the familiar ringing makes him more attentive. In some approximate way, he's been there and done that. The distance between the poems and him narrows as it would not if he were younger.

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VALUE THE WORKS OF AN AGING POET FOR WHAT THEY ARE

Seamus Heaney. ELECTRIC LIGHT: Poems. New York: Farrar, Straus and Giroux, 2001.

2. Cultural context and stylistic fashions

In Heaney's remembered landscape, he situates the rural Northern Ireland of his youth at the center. It links with the imagined rural Roman scene of Virgil. It stretches outward to touch Spain, the Balkans, the Greece of his lifetime and of antiquity.

Electric Light is in two parts. The second part softens the light on the particulars of place and highlights the people the poet knew who have gone through that blank wall ahead of him. An elegiac mood thus suffuses the later pages of this book.

Heaney marks his loss of famous fellow poets--Ted Hughes, Joseph Brodsky, Zbigniew Herbert. "Would they had stay'd," he laments, quoting Shakespeare, also mourning others less famous--Norman MacCaig, Iain MacGabhainn, Sorley MacLean, George Mackay Brown. Differing images of deer remind him of them, the animals' varieties of behavior suggesting the unique quality of each friend gone. A poem is in memory of one Rory Kavanagh; another of one Mary O Muirithe--names I do not know. Heaney remembers one David Thomson for "the glee of boyhood" he embodied, a blithe survivor like the shipwrecked Arion--whose story Heaney gives us as a kind of footnote to David Thomson in a translation from Pushkin.

These are not my remembrances. At my age, though, I know why they matter to Heaney at his age. I know why he reaches for them as the materials for poems that may come to matter to his readers. A time comes when the remembered dead outnumber the remaining people with whom one still traffics. They gain rather than lose position in the aging memory.

I also know why his poems take well-formed shape. My sense of form, like his, developed when the modern poem--even the free-verse form established by William Carlos Williams--was tightly crafted. Heaney has this modernist predilection to merge sound, sense, and structure. He wants to make thoughtful and shapely patterns of words and lines and stanzas, to construct endings that create an impression of completeness, because he matured before postmodernists attacked the inviolability of self and the certainty, however obscure, of the objective world occupied by the self.

He strives for well-wrought poems because he learned to think of the self as a persistent presence in a deep-structured universe that ultimately could be purposeful. If you think of the self and the world that way, you will strive to represent it accordingly in the forms of your art (and if not, not).

Does Heaney then propose a high modern world view explicitly in these poems? Seldom. They owe much of their flavor to the very diffidence about generality that marks typical high modern art. This diffidence combines with a predilection for using the particular materials of remembered experience. His use of them seems to suggest the unspoken generality. In this deliberate employment of selected details from a finite personal repertoire, of course, Heaney is practicing the poetics of high modernism. The ambiguities and subtleties of high modernist style gave poets the tools for meeting an established standard. Those qualities did not mean that the world was meaningless--only that it was hard to grasp and better approached aslant.

I don't know how thirtysomething poets would read Electric Light. I have to guess that these poems would seem somewhat irrelevant to them. They would miss the flow, the constructivist freedom, the open-endedness, the rhizomatic exuberance of poems that identify current artistic priorities and philosophical world views. Meaning for them emerges from the moments going forward; they would not tend to look for it in a reflection of what was finished.

I do know how a seventysomething reader takes the poems in Electric Light. Their familiar formal precision combines with their familiar reflective subjects to make me feel that I am reading something by someone with whom I share a common vision of the why and what of art. That is so even though his experience as an Irishman and mine as an American differ greatly in detail.

If my sense of seeing a vision in common with Heaney makes my reading of him look like a quaint anachronism to some, who cares? Heaney certainly knows that he is working now within a Western cultural environment quite different from that within which he grew up in the 1950s; and he certainly knows that that older experience still predisposes him to write a certain way, though times have changed. The interesting thing about Heaney's book is that popular commentators take it for what it is and not for what it is not. The lesson, I suppose, is that a Nobel Prize (won in 1995) confers continuing relevance on a writer's work even after styles and attitudes change.

More important, the seriousness given Heaney's book in various reviews suggests that the dominant note of the current artistic moment is not totalitarian. It will not crush what is not the fashion, since the fashion itself is deliciously changeable and wonderfully unfettered by ideological purity.

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VALUE THE WORKS OF AN AGING POET FOR WHAT THEY ARE

Seamus Heaney. ELECTRIC LIGHT: Poems. New York: Farrar, Straus and Giroux, 2001.

3. Some of Heaney's poems in operation:

At Toomebridge | Perch | Lupins | Known World | The Gaeltacht | On His Work in the English Tongue | Electric Light

But these issues of cultural context and stylistic fashion are less interesting than the particulars of Electric Light, at least if you are of a certain age. I approach the poems as artifacts of an individual's thinking and feeling about remembered experience in the second half of the twentieth century. The artifacts are the formalities of poetry that appear to take substance from and give form to that thinking and feeling. By looking at the way a sampling of the poems operate, I try to see the way they were made and derive from that a valued experience of my own, here and now.

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"At Toomebridge"

The opening poem, "At Toomebridge," establishes what the stylistic stratagems are going to be. And it also suggests that this is going to be a project of return, recall, reflection.

This is a two-stanza poem with five lines in each stanza, written in iambic pentameter. Its tidy little appearance on the page is immediately complicated, however, by the incompleteness of the sentences opening both stanzas. The whole first stanza, in fact, is a single incomplete sentence. This contrasts with the formal propriety of the poem's appearance and tends to sharpen the attention of the entering eye of the reader.

The word "Where" opens each of the two stanzas, putting the idea of the place, Toomebridge, at the forefront of the poem. The incompleteness of the sentences that "Where" opens gives an importance to the word that it would not have if it were smoothly functioning in a complete sentence.

The first stanza describes the scene where water from an inlet of the sea, Lough Neagh, pours into the Bann River over a fishing weir. The poem offers up this scene in detail so that it functions as an object for contemplation about the present and the past. Heaney calls the Bann River "a continuous present." There is an unbroken connection, then, between what happened there in the past and what might be happening now. The poem represents that unbroken connection in the fifth line of the first stanza and the first line of the second stanza. Together they make up a five-foot ensemble:

Present of the Bann.

Where the checkpoint used to be.

Form thus flows into meaning. The continuous present includes the civil warfare that took place here in the past. For we learn in the next line that here a "rebel boy was hanged in '98." This then leads to the observation that this place evokes "poetry" for the poet, in two senses. The image of "negative ions" suggests one sense. The images of "the slime and silver of the fattened eel" suggest the other. The invisible abstraction of fundamental matter and the sensory concreteness of the inhabitant of the water--together these two images make a totality of experience. That totality is inseparable from the place of the poem. As the opening poem in the volume, "At Toomebridge" appropriately announces the central importance of remembered places in what is to come.

In mid-twentieth century, a poet could still demarcate country from city. He could still remember the rural environment of childhood as a world apart, not dependent on the culture of the city. "At Toomebridge" seems to be setting up such a world apart for a return visit.

 

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"Perch"

The next two poems, "Perch" and "Lupins," carry forward the importance of that setting by examining representative animals and plants inhabiting it. Both say something more about the experience that once was possible where the Bann flowed through Toomebridge.

These poems, like "At Toomebridge," are shapely thought. Heaney works hard to make the form and the imagery of his poems compatible with a thought--with a "theme," as we once said in English classes when we could infer generalizations about the condition of humanity from poems more blithely than we would today. "Perch" here is touching, however obliquely, on an ancient thought. Heraclitus said it about 500 years before Christ: "You cannot step twice in the same river." Being is not static but dynamic: it is always a becoming.

The poem catches this thought of the fluidity of experience in the final image of the river in the poem's concluding line:

In the everything flows and steady go of the world.

But even this final image cannot say with total certainty that the world is all flux: it has a "steady go." This compels us to go back and consider the perch of the poem before acquiescing totally in the Heraclitean idea of becoming.

The fish, after all, are the essential image. They occupy a remarkably steady place in a "finland" universe that has a "water-roof" above and a "bottom." The perch "hang" and "hold" and are "adoze" in that universe that the poet saw way back when and that he can still see now. The breath of a thought from Parmenides, Heraclitus's opposite, comes to the reader's mind as he pictures the perch "runty and ready" and holding their own. For Parmenides, change was an illusion of the senses; an unchanging material substance composed the universe. The perch as they emerge from these lines look like the same old "muscle and slur."

The poem of course is not a philosophical discourse. It has no need to resolve these contradictory breaths of philosophical thought one way or the other. The transience of this boyhood scene and its permanence play together; they give the reader a sense of the scene of Toomebridge. We are in the presence of opposites that combine to make the whole thing visible, credible--and, after many years, still accessible.

The stanzaic arrangement of the poem is five pairs of five-stress lines--iambic pentameter. The labored approximation of the rhymes of these couplets formally renders the sense of being in the presence of oppositional forces that somehow come together. But they come together imperfectly, not with the complete resolution that out-and-out rhymes would suggest. "River/waver," "ready/body," "pass/adoze," "slur/air," "hold/world"--the rhyming secures the thought of the poem in a steadiness. However, it is a steadiness repetitively weak and uncertain; but it has lasted through the years sufficiently to matter to the poet even now. Something seems to be holding in Toomebridge, but Heaney carefully--tastefully?--does not blurt it out. He allows the perch image to say as much as it can say about the permanence of his old boyhood haunt.

 

lupins

"Lupins"

That impression of something holding through long years comes even more emphatically in the third poem of the book, "Lupins." The first line makes that unmistakable:

They stood. And stood for something. Just by standing.

These light purplish blue plants were waiting "there/ For sure." They were "unbending" and "stood their ground." They would "never balk." All this emphasis on a plant image that never dies at the old home turf suggests an enduring substantial reality (as opposed to an ever-changing stream). But here too the lupins, like the perch, do not suggest mere stasis. Although they were the very picture of solid permanence, their seed packets made them "erotics of the future."

But this is not merely a still-life picture of lupins in that setting from the past, presumably at Toomebridge. Having allowed the lupins to suggest both solidity and generativity, the poem moves toward an important conclusion (literally as the last line of the poem) about the poet's relationship to the plants:

And none of this surpassed our understanding.

We see here the high modern vision, so different from the current postmodern refusal to connect the dots of a problematic universe. It was possible, the poem allows us to think, for a person to have a significant experience with lupins. It could be an experience that hinted at meaning about the way the person and the lupins occupied the world. In a place like Toomebridge, the simple things of the plant world--like the simple things of the fish world--connected their observer to the (ordered?) complexity of the whole world. The poem authorizes this broad conceptual reach when in the first stanza it establishes a twenty-four-hour, or universal, role for the lupins: they are

Rose-fingered dawn's and navy midnight's flower.

If the poet had expressed this theme bluntly, he would have risked sentimentality or irrelevance in the mind of a reader today. Heaney again avoids making a broad and banal generalization by committing himself to the prophylactic of demanding form. "Lupins" is a total of twelve lines. It contains three four-line stanzas, measured in standard iambic pentameter. As in "Perch," the reader faces the tension and challenge of approximate rhymes. Each of the three stanzas is regularly rhymed a-b-a-b. Heaney's choices of rhyming words are interesting and fitting, I think, to a reader accustomed to the indirect approach of the modern mind to the absolute truth lurking somewhere under the things of the senses. They tell the reader in that characteristically diffident manner that connections occur. The rhymes in the first and second stanzas illustrate: "standing/unbending," "there/flower," "azure/future," "promise/purchase."

While the poem advances generality with the utmost caution, while it hues to the particular details about the plants, it not only makes that broad concluding statement ("And none of this surpassed our understanding") but prepares the reader for it in the two preceding stanzas. In the first line of the poem, we learn straightway that the lupins "stood for something." The second stanza, after dealing with the "seed packets" and "spires" of the plants, goes to a wide focus to take in the "erotics of the future" and the whole of sky and earth. The lupins are

Lip-brush of the blue and earth's deep purchase.

By the time the reader finishes these first three poems of the book--"At Toomebridge," "Perch," and "Lupins"--he knows something of where the poems will be taking him and what kind of vehicle will be available.

 

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"Known World"

The poems of course go far from Ireland, and they do not all dwell on the country scene. Some show Heaney the professional poet tooling here and there at certain points of his career, drinking and talking and reading poetry with peers in far places. "Known World" (22) shows the poet at a Balkan poetry festival in '78. The poem concerns itself with the jarring contrast between the known world of the poet from Ireland and the unknown world into which the festival's invitation has drawn him. His adventures in a wayward taxi en route to read poems "at a cement factory in the mountains" constitute the central dramatic action of the poem.

Heaney dates the poem May 1999, assuring that we will read it as an old emotional experience recollected in tranquillity. It is longer than the poems examined above: it runs six pages and breaks out into seven uneven sections, all of them written in blank verse. We have here an apparent miscellany of reflections--some lifted in direct quotes from the poet's old travel notebook. The poem recalls the poet's fellow poets, a Russian, an Italian, a "Finnish Hamlet," a German, a Dane. It recalls the backwardness of life in Belgrade. The poet reports leaving his "known world" when he saw Muslims wearing fezzes. Masses of people were moving in long refugee lines (the people had rehearsed well by the time of the Kosovo atrocities of our time). Doorsteps were daubed "Serb house"--marking the endless enmities of the Balkans, commissar rule to the contrary notwithstanding. The poet and his fellow poets saw pilgrim streams of people (it was not clear to me whether they were different from the refugees mentioned earlier) going to memorialize the General Strike and to celebrate Greek Orthodox Madonna's Day. The two contrasting belief systems thus paraded in front of them.

Why this miscellany of poet's memories?

Much of memory is miscellaneous. A poet taking the backward view can employ his artistic equipment to make a pastiche that suggests something significant. Older poets are in position to write like vacuum cleaners--to suck up old threads and scraps and ball them up in a single bag of meaning. The "bag" in this instance is a recollection of pervasive tragedy:

That old sense of a tragedy going on

Uncomprehended, at the very edge

Of the usual, it never left me once....

The poet could not comprehend the varieties of tragedy observed on this festival junket because, presumably, his own Irish tragedies, far away, were somehow different from those in this unknown world. Comrades-for-a-day with his fellow poets, he nevertheless could not enter into their allegories, their sad experiences of political terror. As the avant-garde Dane said to him,

You are a south. Your bogs were summer bogs.

Written long after the end of the Cold War in a period now being heralded as the age of "globalizing" interdependency, this poem may still connect with current political interest as we await the trial of Milosevic for crimes that are classically Balkan. But it was probably not Heaney's intention to arouse such current interest. The sense of tragedy that he found was of the most persistent sort, capable of flourishing under communist or Christian conditions--or any human conditions in worlds known and unknown.

Predictably, Heaney finishes the poem with a neat craftsman's flourish. When it opened, the poem quoted the crazy taxi driver taking the poet into the unknown world:

"Nema problema!"

In the end, safe aboard a Lufthansa plane, smoking a cigarette, sipping wine, and listening to music on the headphones, the poet repeats the phrase to himself--no problem.

All systems go.

 

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"The Gaeltacht"

This sonnet expresses the yearning for a youthful past that takes its shape in memory from the pals the poet "gabbled" with then. The poet wishes to re-join his friends again in 1960 back in Rosguill, which, presumably, lies in the Gaeltacht--an Irish-speaking rural area. Barlo would be alive again, and the others (Paddy Joe, Chips Rafferty, Dicky) would be talking Irish with the poet. And their girlfriends would re-appear too. The "people we are now" would hear what the people they were then were saying in Irish. Heaney concludes the poem with a conceit inspired by Dante. If the poet indeed could have his wish, his sonnet, like one by Dante,

Could be the wildtrack of our gabble above the sea.

I take this to suggest that the sonnet would be the vehicle for bringing past life and present life together. Art serves conscious life by enhancing it, by turning the "gabble" of Irish into a permanence. Like much in this book, the thought is a familiar one from our cultural tradition; but it gathers some fresh air about it because of Heaney's carefully expressive diction.

 

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"On His Work in the English Tongue"

The poem is in memory of Ted Hughes. Heaney collaborated with Hughes in editing an anthology of poems, The School Bag, published in 1997, a year or so before Hughes died of cancer. It was a kind of history of English language poetry and of poetry written in England, Wales, Scotland, and Ireland--the Celtic regions. He collaborated with Hughes also in 1982 on The Rattle Bag, an anthology for children.

Source: © Claas Kazzer 2000 http://www.uni-leipzig.de/~angl/hughes.htm

The history of language in the British Isles, going back to the bardic tradition of the Celts, from whom he claimed patronage, motivated Hughes.

Source: Ann Skea: http://www.zeta.org.au/~annskea/Default.html

Heaney's memorial to Hughes focuses upon the power of poetic language to negotiate with the otherwise unexpressible things of the soul. Heaney alludes to the transformative power of coming out of the "upper room"

To fret no more and walk abroad confirmed.

He wants to show the connection between Hughes's use of language (and perhaps any such bardic poet) and the analogous experience of religious insight contained in the story of the disciples with Jesus in the upper room before the Crucifixion.

The main business of the poem is to examine, as a memorial to Hughes, poetry's ability to deal with the theme of "passive suffering"--of "hurt-in-hiding." Heaney undertakes this examination by retelling a tale that presumably Hughes told one night walking with the poet--a walk that took on a hellish feeling from the wailing of a nearby power station.

The tale deals with King Hrethel's plight. His son accidentally killed his older brother, leaving the King to punish his son under the prevailing customs. The poet re-words the tale of the old King's suffering as his son's body swings on the gallows. The poem renders the unrelievable woe and grief felt by the father of the slayer and the slain in a separate section that employs the heroic four-stress line of the Old English familiar to us in the Beowulf text. The other sections of the poem are in blank verse. The form is just right to convey indirectly the King's feeling of doom without saying the things of the soul "not to be said."

The doom felt by Ted Hughes when his wife Sylvia Plath killed herself in his absence went unsaid for nearly all his life. It was not until 1998, not long before his death, that poetry allowed him to speak in Birthday Letters. The ending of Heaney's poem refers to poetry as

a tribute paid

By what we have been true to. A thing allowed.

Heaney nowhere in his poem refers to Plath. For me, nonetheless, she is in the poem everywhere. That is, what I know of Hughes's "griefs endured" expands the story of King Hrethel's griefs; and the King's story cycles around to bear the unspoken significance of Hughes's story.

Soul has its scruples.

So does Heaney's elegiac mode. This unsentimental, tough, knotty poem aptly memorializes Ted Hughes.

 

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"Electric Light"

You find the title poem at the end of this book. It is in three parts.

The first one evokes the first house where as a child the poet saw electric light. It vividly and selectively recalls details of the poet weeping at the strange home of an old woman, where she left the electric light burning, hoping it would comfort him (it did not).

The second part follows the poet, presumably growing up, by ferry and train from Belfast Lough to the Thames. It joins with the first part through the image of the sound of waters. At the end of the first part, the old woman, perhaps the poet's grandmother, speaks to him under the electric light in sibilant sounds that resemble "cavern waters/ Lapping a boatslip." As the second part starts, he associates her lisping sounds in retrospect with prophecy ("Eddy of sybilline English.") That shifts the scene to the ship and dock that lead to the train down to the Thames. There the poet, presumably embarking on his life's journey, emerges "from tube-mouth into sunlight."

The third and final part of the poem revisits the old woman in her "fur-lined felt slippers unzipped." It depicts the poet as a boy experimenting with the switch for the overhead light in her house and with the illuminated radio dial. The World War II blackout is in force. The poet remembers again not only her slippers but her dirty, hard fingernail with which the poem opens.

...it must still keep

Among beads and vertebrae in the Derry ground.

I suppose Heaney saw in this poem a representation of his trajectory from unhappy childhood to the "Cloth of Gold" waiting at the start of his career. Heaney's Celtic origins may call him to a bardic role, giving prophetic voice to the tribe. He may see in this personal narrative the representative experience of the whole, the journey from the nurturing enclosure through the light to the challenge of adulthood.

But I confess that the images of the poem do not work for me with any special felicity. And the theme of growing up and going forth, though admittedly handled wholly with concrete details, seems commonplace. Because Heaney chose this to be the title of the whole book, I tried to discover its special significance, but feel that I failed.

 

This sense of failed discovery clung like a not unpleasant aftertaste to this book of poems. The poems certainly are not the productions of youthful exuberance. But they open onto an aging sensibility that takes strength from the act of remembering as well as from that which it remembers. For a reader standing near the same place in the march of years, the poems widen familiar prospects. Occasionally, owing to the texture of Heaney's remembered experience and to the craft that appropriates that experience, they confer the unrestrained surprise one feels when he confronts a poem that is really working.

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22 June 2001 Copyright © 2001 Richard P. Richter